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the fact that this was a thing you worked on in your spare time is crazy to me. like its so damn good that i thought it was meticulously crafted. i love me a shitpost that also shows how skilled and talented you are

it's got potential and the writing isn't bad. the codes slowed the pace down a bit but i like that they had a purpose in the story. i'm looking forward to seeing how the rest of the story goes

plese

without dialogue: 2.5 stars
plop muffin: 4 stars

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